Tested this. Have following complaints:
1) Having a cloakable commander with a "get into biovizier range" objective means that all the other units are plain unnecessary. It is quickest and easiest just to sneak around e v e r y t h i n g (except that flea pack).

Possibly the last line of defense could feature patrolling fleas, or even infiltrator or two. Or just strip that cloak.

2) Victory doesn't stop the starship counter.

3) Nothing else happens on victory (ofc i understand that's this is a WIP)

4) Should have some notification about when reinforcements have arrived, complete silence makes them easy to miss!

5) Should mention that the actual things you'll be hunting for would be pylons and not fusions/moho. A new player won't know that pylon links things, probably.

Hehe, did another test.

1) Morphs are not locked for the player - so i lent myself to a Crabe, and then, using reclaim, a Scorpion.

2) Terraform is not locked. I considered using this to make a Crabe Spire, but then i made scorpion.

3) It is possible to just murder Biovizier with the Scorpion rather than "confront him" :P

Fail condition, time out, did not work for me.
I am liking these missions but they are way to hard for new players.