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That
was
a
great
commentary
cast.
I
think
you
should
do
more
of
these.
You
did
a
good
job
of
describing
the
strategic
situation
and
highlighting
individual
battles
of
interest.
I
liked
that
you
included
both
play-by-play
commentary
(
"here's
what's
happening)
with
analysis
(
i.
e.
"that
was
good/bad,
and
here's
why")
.
|
1 |
That
was
a
great
commentary
cast.
I
think
you
should
do
more
of
these.
You
did
a
good
job
of
describing
the
strategic
situation
and
highlighting
individual
battles
of
interest.
I
liked
that
you
included
both
play-by-play
commentary
(
"here's
what's
happening")
and
analysis
(
i.
e.
"that
was
good/bad,
and
here's
why")
.
|
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| 3 |
I like that you zoom out to show the big picture and zoom in for details. However, I think you should zoom in and out less frequently and less suddenly. You cast like you play, but when you're casting you need to consider what the audience is seeing. When you're playing you can mentally jump in and out and from place to place quickly because you know what you're looking for; when you're casting, the audience can't anticipate your camera moves the way you can, so it comes across as jerky and disorienting. Consider zooming out, then staying zoomed out for a while to describe the overall strategic situation, then zoom in, and stay zoomed in for a while to focus on a battle.
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3 |
I like that you zoom out to show the big picture and zoom in for details. However, I think you should zoom in and out less frequently and less suddenly. You cast like you play, but when you're casting you need to consider what the audience is seeing. When you're playing you can mentally jump in and out and from place to place quickly because you know what you're looking for; when you're casting, the audience can't anticipate your camera moves the way you can, so it comes across as jerky and disorienting. Consider zooming out, then staying zoomed out for a while to describe the overall strategic situation, then zoom in, and stay zoomed in for a while to focus on a battle.
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| 5 |
Your pace was good. Not too fast, not too slow. If you went a little faster, that would be okay, and would let you describe more of what's happening across the entire battlefield and let you pick out more individual interesting battles to show.
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5 |
Your pace was good. Not too fast, not too slow. If you went a little faster, that would be okay, and would let you describe more of what's happening across the entire battlefield and let you pick out more individual interesting battles to show.
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| 7 |
All in all a good cast. Please keep it up!
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7 |
All in all a good cast. Please keep it up!
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