| 1 | This looks very promising to me as a free-for-all map, with some nice defensive terrain in each of the castles themselves (including moats, ramparts, turrets, and even zwingers (also called corridors of death) combined with bent entrances (that are ideal for placing short-ranged units or structures around the bends for effective defense, whilst protecting them from artillery fire). | 1 | This looks very promising to me as a free-for-all map, with some nice defensive terrain in each of the castles themselves (including moats, ramparts, turrets, and even zwingers (also called corridors of death) combined with bent entrances (that are ideal for placing short-ranged units or structures around the bends for effective defense, whilst protecting them from artillery fire). | 
                
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                    | 3 | Of course, the map also encourages players to expand outside of their castle walls, since there's plenty of mexes to claim out there, especially in the center of the map. Although the castle walls provide an incredible degree of defense, they alone can't stop a player that's determined to besiege them, especially if they decide to use the otherwise rarely-used Quake missiles to make those castle walls crumble down into rubble (and that's in addition to using superweapons of course). Moreover, for as steep as the castle walls are, that won't stop spiders (including Scorpions and Funnelwebs) from scaling them. | 3 | Of course, the map also encourages players to expand outside of their castle walls, since there's plenty of mexes to claim out there, especially in the center of the map. Although the castle walls provide an incredible degree of defense, they alone can't stop a player that's determined to besiege them, especially if they decide to use the otherwise rarely-used Quake missiles to make those castle walls crumble down into rubble (and that's in addition to using superweapons of course). Moreover, for as steep as the castle walls are, that won't stop spiders (including Scorpions and Funnelwebs) from scaling them. | 
                
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                    | 5 | The only ways that I could see this map improved with relatively little effort is these: | 5 | The only ways that I could see this map improved with relatively little effort is these: | 
                
                    | 6 | - 1. The center could do with far fewer mexes. I'd say cut the centermost mex count down from 16 to just 4, and cut the rimward mexes down from 16 to 8. | 6 | - 1. The center could do with far fewer mexes. I'd say cut the centermost mex count down from 16 to just 4, and cut the rimward mexes down from 16 to 8. | 
                
                    | 7 | - 2. I'm a bit concerned about how narrow the bridges and corridors are, and how they could easily cause traffic jams when multiple striders start hitting the field. Maybe they'd be better off if they were made wide enough to allow a couple of Detriments to reliably pass around eachother as they move in opposite directions? | 7 | - 2. I'm a bit concerned about how narrow the bridges and corridors are, and how they could easily cause traffic jams when multiple striders start hitting the field. Maybe they'd be better off if they were made wide enough to allow a couple of Detriments to reliably pass around eachother as they move in opposite directions? | 
                
                    | 8 | \n | 8 | \n | 
                
                    | 9 | Overall,
             
            I 
            think 
            I'd 
            rate 
            this 
            map 
            4/5 
            stars.
             
            It 
            shows 
            great 
            promise. | 9 | Overall,
             
            I 
            think 
            I'd 
            rate 
            this 
            map 
            4/5 
            stars.
             
            It 
            shows 
            great 
            promise,
             
            and 
            is 
            very 
            nicely 
            detailed,
             
            but 
            is 
            held 
            back 
            by 
            some 
            flaws 
            in 
            functionality 
            and 
            balance. |